Hello today I have made a reindeer on google drawings.I have done this for writing and put a lot of my time into my reindeer and it is a mix between Rudolf and Dasher.What is your favourite part?
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, 15 December 2020
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hi xavier
ReplyDeleteI liked your super cool riendeer it was a good idea to put the bright red nose on him so he can see when its foggy maybe next time you could put eyebrows on the reindeer.
from tristan
hi xavier wow you put alot of positive words like lightning i hope,you have a great day.from Marcus
ReplyDeletehi xavier
ReplyDeleteI like how you put in the sentence lightning fast shoes that help him fly
its like rocket shoes
maybe you could make the nose a little smaller.
from Joseph
hi Tristan,Joseph and Marcus.Thank you for commenting and the things I should add next time.THANKS!
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