I hope you enjoy my story! 👍
Wednesday, 25 November 2020
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Xavier,
ReplyDeleteYou amaze me with the detail you put into your writing. I felt like I was there with the kid on a mission. Your next step is to check where you could add punctuation and to check your tense. (me, I, him).
Keep up the fantastic work, I enjoy reading your work.
Miss Esselink
Hello it's Joshua your work is so detailed but think you could fill the last page on the blog work and I like the transition you put on it bye. From Joshua
ReplyDeleteHi Xav,
ReplyDeleteI love that colour. What do you mean by I loved liked?
Louis.
hi Xavier this is a lot of words in 3 slides the only thing that I didn't like is that there was no pictures. Also thats impressive. -Koby
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