the force awakens!
one frosty morning in the world of star wars
There was a crazy dude called luke skywalker
He had lots of friends
Their names were…
Rey,Poe,Han Solo,Chewbacca and
(friendly fill)
Luke’s dad was a mean guy called
DARTH VADER and his pupils called
Storm Troopers
And he has a ship called the tie fighter
He even can use the force!
He also has a lightsaber
But luke skywalker has a x-wing
can use the force and he has a lightsaber.
One day darth vader plans an attack to
KILL luke skywalker
That is not very nice
The attack was on!
Darth vader gets his gear and attacks
on the tie fighter
Luke does not suspect a thing
But he is always properd
Smash!
Darth vader was attacking
BOOM BOOM BOOM
Went the guns on the ship
Luke was in danger
Luke was about to get killed but just then
Chew Baka jumped in the way
He got killed!
just then a guy called friendly fill
came up to darth vader and got an RPG and
Shot darth vader
BOOM!
THAT JUST HAPPENED
They celebrated by eating cake
The end
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nice story xavier
ReplyDeleteI really liked the part were darth vader was planning an attack
maybe next time you could add more parts
please make chewbaca live next time
From Tristan